開頭段
In contemporary society, much ink has been spilled about......(題目改寫),and some claim that... Such assertion, however, is torn to pieces by others. As far as I am concerned, the statement that...（題目改寫）is arbitrary and one-sided because it fails to take all the related circumstances into consideration. We should analyze this statement comprehensively before we draw the eventual conclusion.
結(jié)尾段
In brief, based on the previous discussion, the issue...(改寫題目）is complex and needs a case by case analysis. We are not supposed to disregard those situations where the statement is unjustifiable. As a result, I cannot totally agree with this statement.
中間段
這里我推薦大家多看看考題，將其分分類，想一想一般都有什么理由可以寫，像壓力、經(jīng)濟等理由是很適用的，下面我就給大家舉一個例子
Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
Young people nowadays do not give enough time to help their communities.
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
題型：隱藏絕對詞類
話題：社會類
分析：隱藏絕對詞類的題目暗含的意思是一類人都應(yīng)該做某事兒。我們既可以完全同意這個事兒的2-3個好處，也可以完全不同意找到其2-3個比較好展開而且不重復(fù)的壞處，畢竟一個事兒很難適合所有人，只要我們找到一個反例，實際上就可以很好地反駁這個題目。
思路一：一邊倒同意
1.由于很多大城市的生活成本高到了前所未有程度，現(xiàn)在的年輕人普遍面臨著雙重壓力，因此沒有時間和精力來幫忙社區(qū)
First and foremost, with the living costs in most of megalopolises hitting all time high, a large proportion of young urban residents today are exposed to scissor-style pressure, as a result of which rare will be the spare time that is available for making contributions to improving the community. For relevant examples we only need to turn to the experience of my elder brother, a newly graduated college student, majoring in software engineering, working in a leading software company as a development engineer.
越來越大的壓力： mounting pressure pressure|stress|strain
大城市： megalopolises|megacity|big city|metropolises
A majority of youths today|A multitude teenagers at present are exposed to a scissor-style pressure: from above, through their parents with ever-higher expectations, and from below, from their peers most of whom try their best to outdo each other.
2.隨著社交網(wǎng)絡(luò)的出現(xiàn)以及生活節(jié)奏的加快，現(xiàn)在的年輕人跟鄰居熟識的機會越來越少，自然也就不愿意去參與社區(qū)的改善。
On the top of that, there is no point for the young people working in metropolises to help their neighbors if the chance of getting acquainted with them seems quit slim, thanks mainly to the advent of social network applications and also to the increasingly rapid pace of modern life. My elder brother's experience can be cited here again to shed the light on this point.
Money is the most important aspect in a job.
Material reward is not the only factor to consider while choosing a job, but it is the most appealing, particularly for those seasoned employees, thanks to the ever-increasing living cost in the overwhelming majority of metropolises, to the scissor-style pressure they are exposed to from supporting their aging parents as well as raising children, and above all, to their strong desire of receiving salaries in a reasonable proportion to their years of strenuous work.
Helping the community| Voluntary work is not the only factor to consider in their spare time, but it is the most appealing, particularly for those young people from affluent families, thanks mainly to the strong desire to escape the ennui of home and to find identity, and also to the sense of self-fulfillment gained in such kind of activities.
思路二：具體情況具體分析
對于條件比較差的年輕人來說，他們很難找到足夠的時間來幫助改善社區(qū)因為他們沒有選擇只能不遺余力的賺更多的錢，甚至以犧牲自己的身體健康為代價
With regard to young people in poor and backward areas, hardly could they have enough time to make contributions to the improvement of their communities on account of the fact that they have no options but to pull out all their stops to earn more money even at the cost their health. There are myriads of examples in our lives, one of which is my elder brother, a high school graduate, working as a waiter in a restaurant in Beijing.
然而，對于那些來自經(jīng)濟比較發(fā)達地區(qū)的年輕人來說，很容易想象他們中絕大部分人愿意在社區(qū)改善中扮演非常積極的角色。首先，他們更強烈的意識到和諧社區(qū)的必要性；其次，不斷提高的生活水平使得他們不必成為最基礎(chǔ)的需求擔(dān)心，主要問題或許集中在通過改善社區(qū)獲得新的成就感
However, when it comes to the youth in economically advanced/vibrant areas, it takes little imagination to think that a majority of them are willing to play an active role in bettering their neighborhoods.
Granted, helping the community| Voluntary work is not the only factor to consider in their spare time, but it is the most appealing, particularly for those young people from affluent families, thanks mainly to the strong desire to escape the ennui of home and to find identity, and also to the sense of self-fulfillment gained in such kind of activities.
It is much easier for the parents to raise children now than fifty years ago.
思路：一邊倒不同意
現(xiàn)在的父母忙，工作壓力大，沒時間管孩子
First of all, the fact that an overwhelming majority of parents today have no option but to work overtime frequently is hardly a surprise which can be largely attributed to the increasingly fierce competition in the job market, as a result of which, they find it increasingly hard for them to spare ample time for their children.
現(xiàn)在生活成本極高，孩子太難養(yǎng)，根本不敢生
To make things wore, the mounting work pressure is compounded(混合) by skyrocketing living costs in most of metropolises which means that most of urban parents confronted with their inabilities to buy an education for their children.
To achieve successful development of a country, a government should focus its budgets more on young children education than on higher education?
