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1.請介紹一下你的校園:你們的教室在哪里?你們的圖書館在哪里?你們老師的辦公室在哪里?應(yīng)該怎么走才能到這些地方呢?請簡單寫一寫。(40詞以上)
【分析】

作文描述:你們的教室在哪里?你們的圖書館在哪里?你們老師的辦公室在哪里?應(yīng)該怎么走才能到這些地方呢?

思路:

描述校園內(nèi)容,包括教師辦公室,圖書館,操場等,介紹位置,布局;按要求進(jìn)行書寫;運(yùn)用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí);重點(diǎn)短語:welcome to…;on your right,go straight;on your left; in front of; next to;on the playground.

【解答】

My school

Welcome to my school. Look! The teachers'offices are on your right, And the library is on your left. There are many books in the library. Go straight, and you can see the classrooms on your left. There are many classrooms in our school. In front of the classrooms, there is a little park, It is very beautiful. The playground is next to the park and the classrooms, It's so big. Students often play on the playground. My school is very nice, Do you like it?

歡迎來到我的學(xué)校?矗〗處熮k公室在右邊,圖書館在左邊,圖書館里有很多書。直走,你能看到教室在左邊。我們學(xué)校有很多教室,教室前面有一個(gè)小公園,它很漂亮。操場在公園和教室附近,它很大,學(xué)生經(jīng)常在操場上玩。我的學(xué)校很好,你喜歡它嗎?

【點(diǎn)評】作文要分析好內(nèi)容,找準(zhǔn)需要表達(dá)的短語,句子結(jié)構(gòu),認(rèn)真的完成。

2.以"My last weekend"為題,寫一篇小作文,談?wù)勀闵蟼(gè)周末的活動(dòng)。

【分析】

本文的寫作思路:按時(shí)間順序記敘上個(gè)周末的活動(dòng)。寫作時(shí)條理一定要清晰,注意時(shí)態(tài)用一般過去時(shí),可以選擇自己比較熟悉的內(nèi)容發(fā)揮,利用自己熟悉的單詞句式.當(dāng)整篇作文寫完,一定要注意仔細(xì)檢查。

重點(diǎn)詞匯:weekend周末,mountains山,pictures照片。

重點(diǎn)句型:

1.we climbed the mountains我們爬了山。

2.常用句型:①I felt…我感到… ②What do you think of…你覺得…怎么樣?

【解答】

My last weekend
Last Saturday,my parents and I went to the park.First,we watched the flowers.Then,we climbed the mountains.Finally,we flew the kite.In the afternoon,we visited my grandparents.Except me,other family members talked a lot.I played outside.In the evening,we had supper together.

Last Sunday,I cleaned my room.After that,my friends and I went to the zoo to took some pictures.We played happily.And at five o'clock,we went home.I felt happy and tired.

What do you think of my last weekend?

我的上周末

上周六,我和我的父母去了公園。首先,我們看了鮮花;然后,我們爬了山;最后,我們放了風(fēng)箏。當(dāng)天下午,我們看望了我的爺爺奶奶。除了我,其他的家人在聊天,而我在外面玩。晚上,我們一起吃了晚飯。

上周日,我打掃了我的房間。之后,我和我的朋友去動(dòng)物園拍了一些照片。我們玩得很開心。五點(diǎn)鐘,我們回家了,我既感到高興又感覺疲憊。

你覺得我上個(gè)周末怎么樣?

【點(diǎn)評】小學(xué)階段,英文寫作一般考查學(xué)生的語言運(yùn)用能力,寫作內(nèi)容簡單實(shí)用.學(xué)生必須掌握重要的單詞拼寫以及語法結(jié)構(gòu)。寫作時(shí)要認(rèn)真審題,理解題意,根據(jù)要求來寫。

3.你想象中的自然公園是什么樣子的,請以My Nature Park 為題寫一篇小作文,字?jǐn)?shù)不能少于45個(gè)單詞. (提示詞:There is …,There are…,in front of,above,

behind,under,beside,flowers,trees,lake等)

【分析】該題要求以"My Nature Park"為題,來書寫自己熟悉的自然公園,主要是描述公園里的東西以及位置。


提示詞匯:in front of,above,behind,under,beside,flowers,trees,lake等

重要句型:There is …,There are….

【解答】

My Nature Park

There is a nature park in front of my village.It's not big.There is a lake in the park.There are many fish in it.There are many trees beside the lake.There are mang flowers under the trees. The air is nice and clean.I like my nature park.

我的自然公園

在我村的前面有一個(gè)自然公園,它不大。公園里有一個(gè)湖,里面有很多魚。湖的一邊有很多樹,樹底下開了很多花。那里的空氣很清新,我喜歡我的自然公園。

【點(diǎn)評】注意學(xué)會(huì)運(yùn)用課本的相關(guān)句型和重點(diǎn)單詞書寫短文。

4.同學(xué)們,大家已經(jīng)學(xué)了關(guān)于你的一周的英語知識(shí),請你在你的小作文中,以"My weekend"為題向大家介紹你的周末是如何度過的,試試身手吧。

提示詞:often,wash clothes,play football,read books.

【分析】該題以"My weekend"為題,來敘述自己周末的活動(dòng)安排;主要運(yùn)用所學(xué)的一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)以及重要的動(dòng)詞短語進(jìn)行描述即可。

重點(diǎn)詞匯:often,wash clothes,play football,read books.

重點(diǎn)句型:I often…,Sometimes I…In the morning I usually…

【解答】

My weekend

I have a good weekend.On the weekend I often wash my clothes.Sometimes I play football.And I usually read books and do my homework.I like my weekend.And what about you?

我的周末

我過了一個(gè)很棒的周末。周末我經(jīng)常洗衣服,有時(shí)候也踢足球。我也經(jīng)常讀書和做作業(yè)。我喜歡我的周末,你的呢?

【點(diǎn)評】申清題目要求,確定作文的時(shí)態(tài),根據(jù)課本所學(xué)的知識(shí)作答。

5.請以"My friend"為題,寫一篇短文。字?jǐn)?shù)不少于50字,并用上以下詞語。

Amy,a girl,13,America,thin and short,long hair,big eyes,

Small nose,like,math,like,her,very much

My friend

I have a friend.Her name is Amy.She is 13 years old.She is from American.She is thin and short.She has long hairs and big eyes.She has a small nose.

She likes math very much and she is good at it.And I like her very much.We are good friends.。

【分析】1.讀明白作文要求,包括題目、內(nèi)容、時(shí)態(tài)和字?jǐn)?shù)。

2.本篇作文的關(guān)鍵詞已給出,要使用合適的動(dòng)詞把它們串起來使之成為一篇內(nèi)容豐富、邏輯合理、條理清晰的文章。

3.不要漏掉給出的詞匯。

【解答】

My friend

I have a friend.Her name is Amy.She is 13 years old.She is from American.She is thin and short.She has long hairs and big eyes.She has a small nose.She likes math very much and she is good at it.And I like her very much.We are good friends.

【點(diǎn)評】本題考查描寫人物的小作文,要做到語句通順、條理清楚,具體內(nèi)容用自己最熟悉的詞(本文已給出)來組織,避免單詞拼寫錯(cuò)誤。

6.以"This is my day"為題,寫一寫你一天的安排,不少于5個(gè)句子。

【分析】本文以This is my day為題,按時(shí)間順序記敘了一天發(fā)生的事情用First,Next,Then,After that把全文連接起來。最后點(diǎn)題,照應(yīng)題目。注意時(shí)態(tài)可以用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí),也可以用一般過去時(shí),可以選擇自己比較熟悉的內(nèi)容發(fā)揮.

重點(diǎn)詞匯:have breakfast吃早餐,clean room打掃房間,play with sb和某人一起玩耍

【解答】

This is my day

Today is Sunday.First,I get up early at 6:30.I brush my teeth and wash my face.Next,I have my breakfast at 7:00.Then,I clean my room.After that,I play with my best friend.We go to the zoo together.This's my day.What about you?

我的一天

今天是星期天。首先,我六點(diǎn)半起床,刷牙和洗臉。接下來,七點(diǎn)鐘吃早餐,然后,我打掃了我的房間。在那之后,我和我最好的朋友一起出去玩。我們一起去動(dòng)物園。這是我的一天,你的呢?

【點(diǎn)評】小學(xué)階段,英文寫作一般考查學(xué)生的語言運(yùn)用能力,寫作內(nèi)容簡單實(shí)用。學(xué)生必須掌握重要的單詞拼寫以及語法結(jié)構(gòu),要求語句通順,語法、時(shí)態(tài)正確,書寫規(guī)范,上下文之間可以適當(dāng)使用連接詞,如next,then等。

7.以"My Habits"為題,寫一篇作文,運(yùn)用所給單詞,至少五句。

always,often,sometimes,never,read books,go to the park,watch TV,fly a kite,swim in the winter,do my homework

My Habits (我的習(xí)慣)

I have many habits.For example,I always read books everyday.I often go to the park and fly a kite.I sometimes do my homework at home.But I never swim in the winter.These are my habits.What about you?。

【分析】作文可以按照總﹣分﹣總的結(jié)構(gòu)進(jìn)行寫作,條理一定要清晰,運(yùn)用所給單詞,特別是often和sometimes等英語中常用到的頻率副詞,注意時(shí)態(tài)用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí),可以結(jié)合自己熟悉的單詞句式來寫作.

重點(diǎn)句型:

I always read books everyday我總是每天讀書;I sometimes do my homework at home我有時(shí)在家做作業(yè)。

【解答】

My Habits

I have many habits.For example,I always read books everyday.I often go to the park and fly a kite.I sometimes do my homework at home.But I never swim in the winter.These are my habits.What about you?

我的習(xí)慣

我有很多習(xí)慣:例如我每天都會(huì)讀書,我經(jīng)常去公園放風(fēng)箏,我有時(shí)在家做作業(yè),但是我從來不在冬天游泳。這些是我的習(xí)慣,你的呢?

【點(diǎn)評】小學(xué)階段,英文寫作一般考查學(xué)生的語言運(yùn)用能力,寫作內(nèi)容簡單實(shí)用.學(xué)生必須掌握重要的單詞拼寫以及語法結(jié)構(gòu),要求語句通順,語法、時(shí)態(tài)正確,書寫規(guī)范。

8.寫一寫“My Holiday Plan”——我的假期計(jì)劃。

所需詞匯:want to,travel,go shopping,swim,like,by plane,mother,father.

My Holiday Plan

The summer holiday is coming.I am very excited.Now let me tell you my plan.

I will travel to Sanya with my mother and father during this summer holiday.We will go there by plane.I will go shopping with my mother in the evening.During the day,we will go swimming.We will take many photos and buy many special gifts.

I believe we will have a good time there.

【分析】

本文寫作思路:主要結(jié)合所給單詞及短語,把自己的假期計(jì)劃和安排寫下來,并且希望能度過一個(gè)愉快的假期.同時(shí)注意時(shí)態(tài)用一般將來時(shí),可以利用自己熟悉的單詞句式.

重點(diǎn)句型:The summer holiday is coming.暑假快到了;We will go there by plane我們將乘飛機(jī)去那。

【解答】

My Holiday Plan

The summer holiday is coming.I am very excited.Now let me tell you my plan.

I will travel to Sanya with my mother and father during this summer holiday.We will go there by plane.I will go shopping with my mother in the evening.During the day,we will go swimming.We will take many photos and buy many special gifts.

I believe we will have a good time there.

我的假期計(jì)劃

暑假快到了,我很興奮,現(xiàn)在讓我告訴你我的計(jì)劃:

我會(huì)在這個(gè)暑假期間跟著我的父母去三亞。我們將坐飛機(jī)到達(dá)那里,晚上我和媽媽準(zhǔn)備一起去購物。白天,我們計(jì)劃去游泳,我們會(huì)拍很多照片,買很多特別的禮物。

我相信我們會(huì)在那里度過美好的時(shí)光。

【點(diǎn)評】小學(xué)階段,英文寫作一般考查學(xué)生的語言運(yùn)用能力,寫作內(nèi)容簡單實(shí)用.學(xué)生必須掌握重要的單詞拼寫以及語法結(jié)構(gòu),要求語句通順,語法、時(shí)態(tài)正確,書寫規(guī)范.

9.請以"My Favourite Holiday"為題寫一寫你最喜歡的節(jié)日,不少于5句話。

My Favourite Holiday

My favourite holiday is the Spring Festival.It's the Chinese New Year.For the Spring Festival,we buy new clothes,clean the doors,the windows and the floors.And we make dumplings.Kids get lucky money.That's interesting.I love the Spring Festival. .

【分析】

1.全文通用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí),以第一人稱"我"展開敘事,動(dòng)詞用原形。

2.重點(diǎn)詞組: the Spring Festival(春節(jié)), buy new clothes(新衣服) ,clean the doors(擦門) ,clean the windows (擦窗戶), sweep the floors(打掃地板),make dumplings(包餃子), lucky money(壓歲錢).

3.關(guān)鍵句型,有陳述句和并列句。

For the Spring Festival,we buy new clothes,clean the doors, windows and sweep the floors.And we make dumplings. 因?yàn)榇汗?jié)我們可以買新衣服、擦門、擦窗戶和打掃地板.而且我們可以包餃子.(并列句)

【解答】

My Favourite Holiday

My favourite holiday is the Spring Festival.It's the Chinese New Year.For the Spring Festival,we buy new clothes,clean the doors,windows and sweep the floors.And we make dumplings.Kids get lucky money.That's interesting.I love the Spring Festival.

我最喜歡的節(jié)日

我最喜歡的節(jié)日是春節(jié),它是中國的新年。因?yàn)榇汗?jié)我們可以買新衣服、擦門、擦窗戶和打掃地板,而且我們可以包餃子。孩子們可以得到壓歲錢,非常有趣。我愛春節(jié)!

【點(diǎn)評】命題作文,是指用英語針對某一內(nèi)容寫出一篇文章,是英語考試最常見的一種題目類型,英語作文要求閱讀、寫作比較高,英文書寫應(yīng)符合書寫規(guī)范,英文字母要寫清楚、寫整齊、寫美觀,字母的大小和字母之間的距離要?jiǎng)蚍Q.書寫應(yīng)做到字形秀麗漂亮,通篇?jiǎng)蚍Q和諧.掌握寫作的句子中的人稱時(shí)態(tài),在細(xì)節(jié)描寫方面還要多反思,有時(shí)是轉(zhuǎn)折關(guān)系,同時(shí)要掌握一些語法知識(shí)和基本句型。

10.請你用4-6句話描述以前的自己與現(xiàn)在的差異。

提示:short, tall, thin, fat, …

I was …then. Now I am …

【分析】本文主要介紹我過去與現(xiàn)在的情況,注意介紹過去時(shí)用一般過去時(shí),介紹現(xiàn)在與一般現(xiàn)在時(shí).人稱用第一人稱。

重點(diǎn)詞匯、短語:thin瘦的

重點(diǎn)句型:I was naughty then.那時(shí)我很淘氣。

【解答】

I was thin then. Now I am fat. I was short then. Now I am tall now. I was naughty then. Now I am cute.

過去我很瘦,現(xiàn)在我胖了,過去我很矮,現(xiàn)在我很高,過去我很調(diào)皮,現(xiàn)在我很可愛。

【點(diǎn)評】小學(xué)階段的英語寫作一般考查學(xué)生的語言運(yùn)用能力,寫作內(nèi)容簡單實(shí)用。學(xué)生必須掌握重要的單詞拼寫以及語法結(jié)構(gòu),要求語句通順,語法、時(shí)態(tài)正確,書寫規(guī)范即可。

11.請你用4-6句話介紹你熟悉的城市,比較這座城市的過去和現(xiàn)在。

提示:famous, old, small, big, new, now, then

【分析】本文介紹熟悉的城市,介紹過去的情況時(shí)時(shí)態(tài)用一般過去時(shí),介紹現(xiàn)在的情況時(shí)時(shí)態(tài)用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí),人稱用第三人稱。

重點(diǎn)詞匯、短語:an old city一座古老的城市

重點(diǎn)句型: It is very famous.它很有名。

【解答】

Guangzhou is an old city, It is very famous. The park was small then. It is big now. The street was old then, But it is new now.

廣州是一個(gè)古老的城市,它很有名。那時(shí)公園很小,現(xiàn)在它很大。街道是舊的,但是它現(xiàn)在是新的。


【點(diǎn)評】學(xué)生需根據(jù)所提供的信息提煉文章的寫作主題,需了解寫作要點(diǎn)及寫作意圖,仔細(xì)構(gòu)思寫作結(jié)構(gòu),平時(shí)注意積累詞匯及語法知識(shí).

12.請給你的好朋友寫一封信,在信中你可以介紹一下你的家庭。要求:語法正確,語句通順,不少于40個(gè)單詞。

【分析】這里介紹自己的一些基本信息,時(shí)態(tài)用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí),人稱用第一人稱。

重點(diǎn)詞匯:a photo of…的照片;How about 怎么樣。

重點(diǎn)句型:Do you want to know my family.你想了解我的家人嗎?

【解答】

Dear Amy,

Do you want to know my family?Look,this is a photo of my family.The tallest man is my father.And I'm the shortest.My mother is thinner than my father.How about your family?
Yours,

Mary
親愛的艾米,

你想認(rèn)識(shí)我的家人嗎?看,這是我家人的照片.最高的男人是我爸爸.我是最矮的.我的媽媽比我爸爸瘦.你的家人呢?

你的,

瑪麗

【點(diǎn)評】寫作時(shí),注意多用簡單句子,注意時(shí)態(tài),平時(shí)注意一下語法,多背單詞和短語,積累詞匯量.多讀課文,增強(qiáng)語感.

13.假如你是老師,請你設(shè)計(jì)學(xué)校開放日的計(jì)劃,至少寫5句話。

The parents will visit our school on the Open Day.First.

【分析】

1.全文通用一般將來時(shí)(will+動(dòng)詞原形)

2.重點(diǎn)詞組:the Open Day(開放日),visit the classroom(參觀教室),the hall(大廳),go to the playground(去操場),play games(玩游戲)

3.關(guān)鍵句型.主要是陳述句(分三個(gè)部分)

First,the parents will visit the classroom.Ms.Zhang will tell them about the lessons.

首先,父母們會(huì)參觀教室,張老師將會(huì)跟他們說明功課。

Next,they'll go to the hall.The children will sing for their parents.

其次,他們將會(huì)去大廳,孩子們會(huì)唱歌給他們的父母聽。

Finally,they'll go to the playground.

最后,他們將去操場。

【解答

The parents will visit our school on the Open Day.First,the parents will visit the classroom.Ms.Zhang will tell them about the lessons.Next,they'll go to the hall.The children will sing for their parents.Finally,they'll go to the playground.The children will play games with their parents.

孩子們的父母親將會(huì)在開放日來學(xué)校參觀。首先,父母們會(huì)參觀教室,張老師將會(huì)跟他們說明功課;其次,他們將會(huì)去大廳,孩子們會(huì)唱歌給他們的父母聽;最后,他們將去操場,孩子們將會(huì)和他們的父母一起做游戲。

【點(diǎn)評】英語作文,是指用英語針對某一幅圖畫寫出一篇文章,是英語考試最常見的一種題目類型,英語作文要求閱讀、寫作比較高,英文書寫應(yīng)符合書寫規(guī)范,英文字母要寫清楚、寫整齊、寫美觀,字母的大小和字母之間的距離要?jiǎng)蚍Q.書寫應(yīng)做到字形秀麗漂亮,通篇?jiǎng)蚍Q和諧.掌握寫作中句子的人稱時(shí)態(tài),在細(xì)節(jié)描寫方面還要多反思,有時(shí)是轉(zhuǎn)折關(guān)系,同時(shí)要掌握一些語法知識(shí)和基本句型.

14.快畢業(yè)了,你有什么話想對你的同學(xué)說嗎?把它寫在下面。


【分析】本文是一篇應(yīng)用文,主要可以寫明信片的形式寫出畢業(yè)時(shí)對同學(xué)的感謝和祝福.時(shí)態(tài)可用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)。

重點(diǎn)單詞/短語:thank you, appreciate, wish, hope

【解答】

Dear Xiao Wang,

Thank you for your help with my study and life in this 6 years in school.I appreciate the time that spent together with you.I hope that you will have a fresh new start in middle school.Wish you a good luck and happy life.Don't forget to connect with me often.

Yours,

Xiao Ke
親愛的小王:

感謝你這6年來在學(xué)校的學(xué)習(xí)和生活中給我的幫助.我非常珍惜曾和你在一起的時(shí)光.我希望你升入中學(xué)有一個(gè)全新的開始.祝愿你擁有好運(yùn)和快樂的生活!不要忘了常聯(lián)系!

你的好友:

小柯

【點(diǎn)評】作文題首先要審好題,盡量用簡語法單句去寫.注意用熟悉的單詞,語法正確、書寫規(guī)范.

15.以"My hobbies"為題,寫一篇小作文,要求不少于30個(gè)單詞.

提示:I have some hobbies.I like…Hobbies can make me happy.

My hobbies

I have some hobbies.I like playing football,listening to music and drawing pictures.【說明自己愛好廣泛】When I am at school,I often play football with my friends.I think playing football is very interesting and exciting.When I am at home.I like listening to music.Sometimes I like drawing pictures.At weekends,I like going shopping with my parents.【逐一說明自己的愛好】

Hobbies can make me happy.【愛好的作用】Do you have any hobbies?【引發(fā)話題】

【分析】

根據(jù)開頭句子I have some hobbies."我有多種愛好"可知,要使用第一人稱來寫這篇作文.hobbies是復(fù)數(shù),所以就要寫出自己的多個(gè)愛好;結(jié)尾句子Hobbies can make me happy.含義是"愛好讓我高興."所以要寫的愛好必須是健康的、積極向上的!表達(dá)愛好時(shí)通常運(yùn)用的動(dòng)詞形式是like doing something(表示愛好時(shí)like 后面要用動(dòng)詞的﹣ing 形式)。

【解答】

My hobbies

I have some hobbies.I like playing football,listening to music and drawing pictures.When I am at school,I often play football with my friends.I think playing football is very interesting and exciting.When I am at home.I like listening to music.Sometimes I like drawingpictures.At weekends,I like going shopping with my parents.

Hobbies can make me happy.Do you have any hobbies?

【點(diǎn)評】本題考查學(xué)生的寫作能力。靈活運(yùn)用動(dòng)詞的﹣ing 形式來表示愛好:寫作時(shí)必須緊扣題目要求和已給出的句型提示,并靈活使用一些連詞和表示頻度的副詞;書寫時(shí)盡量書寫自己會(huì)寫的短語以便容易得分;還要注意居首字母的大寫、句末合適的標(biāo)點(diǎn)符號!


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